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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Nominator: Gazingo (talk · contribs) 02:01, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: IntentionallyDense (talk · contribs) 22:10, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I will be starting this review shortly! IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:10, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. See issues below. IntentionallyDense (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. lead needs to be improved. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). I checked most of the sources and all info was verified. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2c. it contains no original research. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. passed copyvio check. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. IntentionallyDense (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). IntentionallyDense (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. IntentionallyDense (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:25, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
7. Overall assessment. On hold until issues with criteria 1 are addressed. IntentionallyDense (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Although there are better sources available on the topic this article still meets the GAC. It is reasonably well written, complies with the MOS, has reliable sources, no plagiarism, is broad, not overly detailed, stable, and no issues with images. IntentionallyDense (talk) 22:13, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Sourcing issues

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Figured I should ping @Gazingo: and @IntentionallyDense: for this; large portions of the article is sourced to the Historical Marker Database, which is user-generated and thus inappropriate for use on the wiki. No harm on either the reviewer or writer here, but this article is just not sourced to a GA level. Many of the citations are confusing, such as a BBC page on Cromwell (instead of any of the books or biographies available on the topic) or John Winthrop's 1639 History of New England. I really do think this needs a large revision of sources towards more academic publications in order for these to be truly reliable sources for the topic at hand. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:24, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for bringing this to my attention. I'm not super familiar with non science sources so that is why I missed this. I will be more deligent in the future. IntentionallyDense (talk) 04:07, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Generalissima: @IntentionallyDense: I've fixed the issues with the sources, was unaware HMDB wasn't allowed as the markers themselves are usually put up by local historical societies. Gazingo (talk) 16:01, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm going to ask for a second opinion here. hopefully someone will weigh in soon. IntentionallyDense (talk) 17:44, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Generalissima Just wondering if you think the sourcing issues have been adeqautely addressed? IntentionallyDense (talk) 15:45, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Definitely an improvement; one of the citations is misformatted (Journal articles hosted on JSTOR should use template:cite journal instead of cite website, and include volume and issue. There is still a lot of stuff I would be hesitant to use unless I had absolutely zero other options (local historical society pamphlets, modern press coverage, etc.) I'm also unsure why the two sources in further reading, which appear to be the highest quality available, are not used.
I'll ask a couple editors who I know have done articles on early American history before, Guerillero, Relativity and Dugan Murphy; hopefully this is not too much of a bother for them and they'll be able to give more specific insights! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:59, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
What insights do you seek? Dugan Murphy (talk) 01:48, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dugan Murphy Any major sourcing issues here? From my very basic search there doesn’t appear to be many sources available on the topic but I’m not too comfortable with this area and wanted to make sure I wasn’t missing anything obvious here. Thanks! IntentionallyDense (talk) 02:21, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Going to ping @Gazingo in regards to why the further reading wasn't used. I fixed ref 7. Thank you for your valuable opinion. IntentionallyDense (talk) 18:05, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know much about Connecticut and I've never heard of the Saybrook Colony before. A quick Google Books search brought up this book, this book, and this book. I don't see any of these in the current references list. I imagine there are many other scholarly works that treat Connecticut history more generally that include sections or mentions relevant to this topic. Dugan Murphy (talk) 18:44, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The further reading section predates my edits and consist of a book concerning a period after Saybrook was absorbed and a book about the larger history of Connecticut which only briefly mentions Saybrook. I admit I should use the latter, or a more recent Connecticut History to verify some of the basic facts about the colony. Gazingo (talk) 23:16, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 15:51, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that the Saybrook Colony was sold to Connecticut for annual payment of 180 pounds of one-third wheat, one-third peas, and one-third rye or barley?
Improved to Good Article status by Gazingo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Gazingo (talk) 16:00, 5 November 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.
Overall: Hook and article should be updated to include the correct statistic. Looks good to go. Thanks for doing the correction so quickly. Great work on this! PersusjCP (talk) 17:28, 20 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]