Talk:Satan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (37.5%, but due to paragraph quote, which is properly cited and done.)
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
5
5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y ~~[churchofsatan.com], "American Heritage Dictionary: Devil". both dead.~~

@Iazyges: I cannot find the links. Could you please state where they are located in the article? --Katolophyromai (talk) 21:42, 30 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Katolophyromai: Ref #58, #204. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:36, 30 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: I have replaced the URL in reference #58 with a working URL. The URL in reference #204 actually seemed to work perfectly fine on my computer, so I am not sure why it would be labelled as "dead." In any case, that citation was only one of six citations all supporting the same statement, so I went ahead and just removed it. It could perhaps have qualified as WP:OVERCITE anyway. You may continue with the review. --Katolophyromai (talk) 02:04, 31 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

is a malevolent figure in the Abrahamic religions who add a comma between religions and who.
When it is used without the definitive article (simply satan), the word can refer to any accuser suggest link to Article (grammar)#Definite article.
only a talking serpent suggest only the talking serpent, as I don't recall any other talking serpents in the Bible/Qur'an post-garden, and I don't believe any others are mentioned in Judeo-Christo-Islamic theology.
Thats all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:55, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]