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Need to obtain a better source for employment history and education. Suggestions welcome. Scorchgider (talk) 15:06, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Issues

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I have corrected a small number of grammatical errors in this article, but IMO there still seem to be a number of more general issues with the content that I am unsure how to deal with. CatNip48 (talk) 08:19, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What is 7th August?

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Hi Scorchgider, and thanks for your note. In the sentence beginning "In response to the 2024 United Kingdom riots which named North Finchley as a possible gathering place for the 7th August..." it is not clear to the reader what the 7th August is about, why this date is significant or what is planned on it. This is what needs explanation, not just further sources. Wikipedia should not expect readers to have to dig into sources or other articles to understand what the one they are reading is about, so a brief explanation would be handy here. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 02:24, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laterthanyouthink understood will address this, will need to build an explanation Scorchgider (talk) 20:58, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]