Talk:Samsung Galaxy S III/GA1/32 copyedit
32. "Though only a limited number of the white Galaxy S III 16 GB model was available throughout the world. A small number of blue Galaxy S IIIs of the 16 GB version was released on 8 June in New Zealand, Australia, and Europe. It was delayed at launch due to a manufacturing flaw which results in a large portion of the new smartphones having irregularities with the "hyper-glazing" process. A mistake in production caused an undesirable finish on the blue back covers and resulted in the disposal of 600,000 plastic casings and a shortage of the blue model. The issue was later resolved; however, Reuters estimated that the shortage had cost Samsung two million S III sales during its first month of release." should be "Though only a limited number of the white Galaxy S III 16 GB model were available throughout the world. Also a small number of blue Galaxy S IIIs of the 16 GB version were released on 8 June in New Zealand, Australia, and Europe. Launch was delayed due to a manufacturing flaw which resulted in a large portion of the new smartphones having irregularities with the "hyper-glazing" process. The mistake caused an undesirable finish on the blue back covers and resulted in the disposal of up to 600,000 plastic casings and a shortage of the blue model. The issue was later resolved, however Reuters estimated that the shortage had cost Samsung two million S III sales during its first month of release."
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