Talk:Sammy Rogers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"were auditioning" → "was auditioning" (referring to the entire show; both uses) Done
"through out" → "throughout" Done
"the Sammy" → "Sammy" (person; both uses) Done
Quotes in the lead need references per WP:QUOTE. Done
Overall, every single quote in the article needs to have a reference recited per WP:QUOTE. Done
"She was successful and was called back to screen test auditions alongside other cast members Lindsay was then contacted her via telephone to offer her the role" feels like a run-off sentence and "Lindsay was then contacted her via" sounds off. Done
"she dealt with dealt with" → "she dealt with" Done
"in hospital" → "in the hospital" Done
Add a period after "Dr". Done
"Valentines Day" → "Valentine's Day" Done
"break-up" → "break up" Done
"night club" → "nightclub" Done
"the couples first major storyline" → "the couple's first major storyline" Done
"when Owen awake" → "when Owen awakes" or "when Owen is awake" Done
"wheel chair" → "wheelchair" Done
In #Relationship with Owen Daniels, add commas after "He added", "In addition", and "absence". Done
Add commas after "Following her return" and "Upon her return". Done
"paired the together" doesn't sound right. Done
Add a comma after "He added" in #Reception. Done
Archive sources, especially from Newspapers.com since a change in the title can result in their links not working. Done

Thank you for the review. I will complete the remaining two points later today.Rain the 1 06:58, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have just finished archiving all sources via the wayback machine.Rain the 1 15:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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