Talk:Sakib/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Malleus Fatuorum (talk · contribs) 00:21, 25 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to place this review on hold immediately, as it needs some significant attention from a good copyeditor to meet GA criterion 1a. A few examples:

"... a Jordanian town in the northern corner of the country, a distance of 8 kilometers (5 mi) to the west of the city of Jerash, And 39 kilometers (24 mi) to the north of the city of Amman."
"Sakib nowadays included three villages during the late sixteenth century".
"Sakib's name is relative to the Scope of the water ...".
"In addition, the town was a major center for the pressing olives ...".
"The town was also populated at the time of the Umayyad state in an area called Um Jozeh and Aisra through the traces of some of the mosques."
"Sakib known as Seecip in Mid to late Islamic period."
"And a large community of people of Syria at the beginning of the twentieth century."

I could give many, many, more examples, but it may be that the Guild of Copyeditors could offer some assistance. It would also be worth looking at the guidance for articles on settlements, such as WP:CITIES. Malleus Fatuorum 00:21, 25 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There's no evidence of any work being done on this article, and the work required is considerable. Therefore I'm closing this review. Malleus Fatuorum 01:19, 28 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.