Talk:Saiza Nabarawi

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography

Articles for creation

	This article was reviewed by member(s) of WikiProject Articles for creation. The project works to allow users to contribute quality articles and media files to the encyclopedia and track their progress as they are developed. To participate, please visit the project page for more information.Articles for creationWikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creationTemplate:WikiProject Articles for creationAfC
	This article was accepted on 16 October 2014 by reviewer MatthewVanitas (talk · contribs).

Egypt Mid‑importance

	Egypt portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Egypt, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Egypt on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.EgyptWikipedia:WikiProject EgyptTemplate:WikiProject EgyptEgypt
Mid	This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.

Journalism

	Journalism portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Journalism, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of journalism on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.JournalismWikipedia:WikiProject JournalismTemplate:WikiProject JournalismJournalism
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.

Women writers Low‑importance

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women writers, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of women writers on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Women writersWikipedia:WikiProject Women writersTemplate:WikiProject Women writersWomen writers
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Untitled

Instead of saying "she was born (name)" you might want to say "she was born under the name of (name)." If you have the information, I would include her reasons for being adopted. Did her parents die? Were they unfit to take care of child? When you reference her foster mother, is that her "distant relative" who adopted her or someone else? When you say that Shaarawi took an interest in her, do you mean as a caretaker or as something else? Is there something that piqued Shaarawi's interest about her? Not sure what you mean by this: "She also wrote about her exclusion from the third convocation of parliament in March 1925 in her article 'Double Standard'." Perhaps include more information on what this third convocation of parliament is/was. Your last paragraph looks great! Nice job overall. Oboewankenobie (talk) 19:48, 6 October 2014 (UTC)oboewankenobie (Katie Stawiasz, 10/6/14)[reply]

Hey, Ciara! Things are looking good. I realize that there isn't a ton of information on your author, so what you have is great. My only suggestion is to put more hyperlinks in. That should really make it "stick." Nice job! Oboewankenobie (talk) 14:41, 15 October 2014 (UTC)oboewankenobie[reply]