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Good articleSS Empire Simba has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 25, 2008Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 28, 2008.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that SS Empire Simba, a British cargo ship, was severely damaged in port by a land mine dropped by a German bomber during the World War II?

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Good job on these two articles. The same issues can be seen on both. For one, I would like to see the prose referenced. Also, I would like to see a stub made on both shipbuilding companies. Other than that, these articles look in much better shape than the one that you rushed previously. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 17:36, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Also, keep this in mind: Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 tons, use 200 tons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200 tons.ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 17:39, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The lead is not cited per WP:LEADCITE and ample precedent. Quantities and units generated by {{convert}} have the non-breaking space inserted automatically. For others, I don't use the  , but instead a keyboard entered hard space " " (option + space bar on a Mac). — Bellhalla (talk) 20:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]