Talk:SMS Stein/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• To do tonight. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• Lead " twelve 15 cm (5.9 in) guns" Infobox: 14 × 15 cm (5.9 in) guns. Prose: "15 cm (5.9 in) 22-caliber" I'm guessing the text is correct and infobox is wrong.
  • Fixed
• Range: " 2,380 nautical miles (4,410 km; 2,740 mi) at a speed of 9 knots " Infobox: " 1,940 nmi (3,590 km; 2,230 mi) at 10 knots" On this one, both could be right, but the infobox's number would therefore been uncited.
  • Fixed
• Draft: "5.2 m (17 ft) forward." in prose, " 6.3 m (20 ft 8 in)" in infobox
  • Fixed
• Top speed: 13 in prose, 12 in infobox.
  • Fixed
• "The keel for Stein, the last member of the Bismarck class" The lead says she was five of six?
  • The lead was wrong - funny how many silly mistakes you can make if you're not paying attention, eh?
• "KAdm Louis" Could likely explain what rank a KAdm is, I think it is a real admiral equivalent?
• Oh, reading on, I see you explain it on second usage, not first.
  • Whoops, I didn't realize I had missed the first one of those.
• Well-written genreally, that's all I have to nitpick about. Courcelles (talk) 23:52, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Thanks again, Courcelles! Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
    • No problem! Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:28, 24 July 2018 (UTC)