Talk:SMS Cormoran (1892)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

• overseas cruiser duty for "overseas duties"?
  • Sure.
• Consolidate the separate class and type entries into the class entry as Bussard-class unprotected cruiser
  • Good point.
• There are a bunch of disagreements between the infobox and the design paragraph, which, btw, is really a description.
  • Yeah, that was the infobox from Bussard.
• Why did the Portuguese cruiser require a tow?
  • Hildebrand et. al. don't say.
• One m or two in Pomerania?
  • Typo.
• What's a Bismarck tower?
  • Apparently we have an article on them.
• I know what Polizei-Soldaten are, but most readers won't. Move the explanation to the first use.
  • Done.
• Make sure that all of the articles on this class mention that Geier is their sister ship.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:20, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for the review, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 15:36, 22 December 2013 (UTC)