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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:59, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Specify that Geier was a sister ship.
  • Condor was 83.9 meters (275 ft) long overall and had a beam of 12.7 m (42 ft) and a draft of 4.42 m (14.5 ft) forward. Replace the first "and" with a comma.
    • I don't think that's right - if you cut down the sentence to the basic structure, you get "Condor was 'A'...and had 'B' and 'C'." If you replace the "and" with a comma, you get "Condor was 'A', had 'B' and 'C'.", which isn't right.
  • Refine the link to steam engine to the proper type of Marine steam engine.
    • Done.
  • Add a link to boiler, QF gun, revolver cannon.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:13, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]