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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:51, 25 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments/queries:

  • the body says two marine steam engines but the infobox says one?
    • Fixed as per the Basilisk review
  • were the guns muzzle-loaders? If so, perhaps say so. Forgive my lack of naval artillery knowledge.
    • Ditto
  • when was her 15 cm gun replaced after being removed for the Black Sea trip?
    • See my response at the Basilisk review
  • perhaps link Commodore, also, the German versions of ranks are used elsewhere, perhaps the German spelling should be used for consistency?
    • Good idea - have done the same at Basilisk
  • perhaps mention that Cuxhaven is at the mouth of the Elbe?
    • Done
  • "Upon reaching Wilhelmshaven"
    • Good catch
  • the image is appropriately licensed.

That's me done. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:03, 25 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 27 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
No prob. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:43, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]