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Title announced as Trisoolam?

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This whole article was copy-and-pasted onto the existing unsourced stub at Trisoolam. I have reverted that.

If or when there is a reliable source to say that the title is Trisoolam, then please add it to this article and then use the correct WP:RM process to get the page moved to that title. The way to do this is to add {{subst:RMassist|Untitled Trivikram Srinivas project |Trisoolam|reason= Title of film has now been announced and reliably sourced.}} to the top of the section at Wikipedia:Requested_moves#Uncontroversial_technical_requests. PamD 09:13, 22 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I see that the article at Trisoolam now says the title is Trishulam. Both the original version and this are unsourced. If anyone has a reliable source for the title of this project, please add it and move this article. PamD 22:19, 22 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Page moves

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This morning someone moved the article to S/o Satya Moorti. I Googled and found several hits for the title, though none of them looked particularly reliable - not my specialist area - but went along with the editor who'd given it this name per WP:AGF, just expanding it to what seemed to be the full form . In hindsight I should just have moved it back to the "Untitled project" title, apologies. Another editor tried to correct things by cut and paste moves, but I have reverted those. See Wikipedia:Requested_moves/Technical_requests#Requests_to_revert_undiscussed_moves. Apologies for an early-morning misjudgement. PamD 09:25, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 17 March 2015

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I would like to change the poster image to a more fitting one OnePointz (talk) 22:13, 17 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

And what image is that? Stickee (talk) 00:30, 18 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 15 April 2015

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Anaconda Park (talk) 05:41, 15 April 2015 (UTC) Enter Box-office[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. — {{U|Technical 13}} (e • t • c) 12:08, 15 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 19 April 2015

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in cast list add Amit Kumar Tiwari - Pallavi's cousin (son of M.S. Narayana) 183.83.226.158 (talk) 21:58, 19 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Edgars2007 (talk/contribs) 05:57, 20 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Can't really provide a reliable source yet since the movie was just released. He is a highly talented uncredited actor. If you watched the movie then you'll know.

Semi-protected edit request on 28 April 2015

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49.206.198.61 (talk) 05:20, 28 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. Jamietw (talk) 05:59, 28 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

collections about 6 millions — Preceding unsigned comment added by 106.51.132.218 (talk) 08:45, 28 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 04:04, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this article first thing tomorrow. Thank you. Looks good at first glance. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 04:04, 16 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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Lead
  • "The film revolves around three characters; one follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn. " — "The film revolves around three characters; the first follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn."
 Done Rephrased. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:31, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Plot
  • Wikilink Ooty and Reddiarpatti.
  • "apologizes" — "apologises".
Two changes done. Reddiarpatti does not have an article. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:43, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Production
  • "rumored" — "rumoured".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:43, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Filming began at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Shift it to filming section and change "Filming began on 22 September at a Hyderabad mall." to "Principal photography began on 22 September at a Hyderabad-based shopping mall."
Actually, its the production works that have begun on 10 April 2014. Made the second change. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:48, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: What exactly does "production works" mean? Is it Pre-production works? — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:56, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No. I meant the official launch ceremony. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:58, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: If that's the case, then rephrase it as "The film was officially launched at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 09:01, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:05, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Ileana D'Cruz, the female lead in Srinivas' films Jalsa (2008) and Julai, reportedly agreed to perform an item number in the film (her comeback in Telugu cinema) for a high fee." — If D'Cruz was in the film, then why isn't she mentioned in the "Cast" section? — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 09:02, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like Miniapolis removed the content "Her inclusion however remained unconfirmed" during the c/e. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:05, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: Thought as much. I have removed the info on her anyways. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 09:07, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I should have done this earlier. Anyways, Thank you. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:08, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: You are welcome. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 09:10, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he asked Srinivas for the name." — "he requested Srinivas to use the name for the titular character's son."
  • "Arjun trained hard for the fight sequences, and hired a well-known gymnast to learn flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills for his stunts." — Who's the gymnast? If there's no info on him, then rephrase the sentence as simply "Arjun learned flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills to perform his stunts."
  • Wikilink Dubai.
All done. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:13, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any news on Brahmi's inclusion?
No. He can be seen in the film, in its plot and in its reviews. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:21, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: That's alright. Just a general question. Not necessary though. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 09:24, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink Peter Hein.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:36, 17 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:
@Pavanjandhyala: Don't see any issues with the article. It passes the GA criteria. Congratulations, Pavan! — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 06:24, 18 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for reviewing this article, Ssven2! This happens to be my fifteenth consecutive GA success! Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:27, 18 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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