Talk:Russian monitor Lava/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 18:50, 15 September 2014 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Right now, it reads as though the 5-inch armored ring was installed on Latnik, not Lava

   One dupe link

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Lava was present during a visit of an American squadron in 1867: see here and here

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   It'd be nice to get a line drawing but Brassey's and Jane's don't normally include them for smaller ships, so oh well.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Thanks for finding the bit about the American visit and catching the small errors. All done now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:15, 16 September 2014 (UTC)

Great work as usual, passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 20:12, 16 September 2014 (UTC)