Jump to content

Talk:Russia in the Eurovision Song Contest 1995/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:32, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Time to get rid of this old nomination! --K. Peake 09:32, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

[edit]
  • The songwriters are not directly sourced anywhere in the body as they should be
  • Wikilink Philipp Kirkovov in the lead
  • "to select Russian entrant." → "to select the Russian entrant."
  • To avoid the lead being too cluttered, you should start a new para at Vocal Band
  • "due to the band members being" → "due to the members being"
  • Wikilink music video
  • I think it is worth noting that the placing was their worst result
    Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background

[edit]
  • Introduce RTR and ORT by their full names per this being the first mentions in the body
  • "which will represent Russia" → "which would represent Russia"
    Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Before Eurovision

[edit]

Evrovidenie "Pesnya-95"

[edit]

Internal selection

[edit]

At Eurovision

[edit]
  • Img looks good!
  • Pipe previous year's contest to Eurovision Song Contest 1994
  • "participation in 1994 contest" → "participation in the 1994 contest"
  • "didn't participate in 1994 contest." → "didn't participate in this contest."
  • "in 1994 contest," → "in the 1994 contest," but where is this 17 part sourced?
  • "Philipp Kirkorov took part in" → "Kirkorov took part in"
  • "on 8 and 10 May," → "on 8 and 10 May 1995,"
  • "wearing white shirt and" → "wearing a white shirt and"
  • "was the Russia's worst placing" → "was Russia's worst placing"
  • "had won the contest;" → "had emerged as winners;"
  • "the Russian singer."" only keep inside speech marks if this is a full sentence per MOS:QUOTE
    Everything's done - Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Voting

[edit]

References

[edit]

Bibliography

[edit]

Final comments and verdict

[edit]

K. Peake, I've made almost all the changes you've requested. Only I had one question (added above). Danilmay (talk) 00:02, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Danilmay MOS:QWQ issues are when you have used double speech marks inside reference titles; replace with singular ones ('). --K. Peake 15:17, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

K. Peake: Done - Danilmay (talk) 17:55, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]