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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 17:42, 1 April 2010 (UTC) Wow! I've just read the article and can't help but be moved by that act of bravery! That's astonishing. If ever there were a subject worthy of GA, this is it.[reply]

My first issue with the article is the lead section- I'd like to see it padded out a bit to comply with WP:LEAD. It starts with the basics and the reason for notability, but then the entire rest of the lead is about the incident in which he died. As amazing as his actions were, the lead needs to summarise the rest of the article as well. Other than that:

When those are fixed, I see no reason not to promote this. HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 17:42, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Ill get working on that. --Kumioko (talk) 17:44, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]