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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
- Images appropriately licensed, although it would be nice to get the German-language maps translated into English.
- @Sturmvogel 66: I will try to request for an English version of the map after the review. Other than that, all done.--Catlemur (talk) 18:29, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- Find a synonym for maximalist in the lede.
- Done
- Link Hellespont, Laconia, Heraclea, phalanx, Cephallenians, Maronea
- Done
- but the specific rites for surrender were unclear and vitiated What does this mean? Religious rites?
- The passage is about the rites of the Roman deditio ceremony of surrender of an enemy community.--Catlemur (talk) 17:25, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- Then add a link to deditio.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:19, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
- Done
- Antiochus then dispatched fleet reinforcements awkward
- Done
- Fortunately for the Romans, Hannibal's fleet was stopped by the Rhodians at the Battle of the Eurymedon reword
- Done
- Antiochus' army, driven to rout awkward
- Done
- one thousand talents – far beyond her ability to pay – was eventually given a break reword
- Done
- Broughton needs an OCLC number--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:01, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- Done