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GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    Just two things:
  1. Defeating all the robots on the screen brings a more difficult wave; a cycle which continues until the character is defeated and player depletes extra attempts to continue the game.
    Doesn't flow very well, especially "brings a more difficult wave" and "player depletes extra attempts to continue the game". Suggest a rewrite such as "...takes the player to a more difficult wave" for the first part and "...the player loses all lives". Another suggestion would be to explain that players lose a life if hit be a robot or object, and the game ends when players have lost all their lives.
    The last two paragraphs in the Development section are both a tad long. I suggest splitting those last two into three or four smaller paragraphs for better readability.
    B. MoS compliance:
    References check out using refToolbar. External links all check out here.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Very well covered.
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    Good usage of captions.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Criteria 3 through 6 look very good so far. Combing through the content to see if it meets 1 and 2 is in progress and, due to the length of the article, may take some time. MuZemike 21:56, 16 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Review placed on hold to address the two issues I mentioned above in 1a. MuZemike 17:31, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]


I believe I've addressed the prose issues you brought up. Please let me know if there is anything else. (Guyinblack25 talk 23:59, 17 April 2009 (UTC))[reply]

Looks good. It passes. MuZemike 00:42, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]