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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 16:37, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 16:37, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • A few comments:
  • Putting cites like this: "blah blah blah[1]blat blat blat[1]" is unnecessary
  • The lead seems quite long. Can you shorten it?
  • White was Born in 1833
  • "of the PDF" is an unecessary ending.
  • Link Virginia
  • Duplicate links to Green Spring, Wheeling, Baltimore and Ohio Railroad, West Virginian Democratic Party, and Burial

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 00:28, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Three more comments:
  • Four more comments:
  • Use either sfns or ref tags, not both. (suggestion only)
  • Tomandjerry211 and Tomandjerry211 (alt), I only used Harvnb reference tags. I was not able to find usage of sfns in the prose. I use Harvnb for books, web citations for websites, and newspaper citations for newspapers. Because the websites and newspapers aren't books, I do not place them in the Bibliography, and therefore, they are not given Harvnb citations. I hope this isn't a deal breaker. -- West Virginian (talk) 16:24, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Standardize hyphens in the isbns.
  • In one source, I see you used both an OCLC and an isbn. It would be nice if you removed either the OCLC or the isbn (preferably the OCLC)
  1. ^ a b Source text
  2. ^ a b Source
  3. ^ a b Anthony "The sky", p. 1
  4. ^ a b John "Facts about the sky", p. 2.