Talk:Robert Weinberg (urban planner)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: RoySmith (talk · contribs) 16:25, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pbritti (talk · contribs) 23:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I'll snag this review. Most of my comments should appear Friday, but I'll try to lodge some initial comments shortly. I have experience reviewing and nominating architecture and biography articles. A cursory glance at the article suggests things should be fairly smooth sailing. If you need me to reply more quickly, please leave a message on my talk page! ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Initial comments

• My appraisal is that the subject is clearly notable but he was something of a low-key figure. Right off the bat, I've got to commend you for the work you've done in scrounging up the details in this article. Great work!
• It's weird that the Harvard schools he attended don't appear to have specific articles about them (unless, of course, the university's organization is a tad different from what I'm used to). Not a problem for this review, but just something I noticed.
• First pass on grammar, MOS, etc. all looks good. I'll get into the nitty-gritty while working through each section.
• Never seen a selective service card in an article before. Since it's a decently high-quality scan that furnishes some personal details, I think it's worth including. An alternative option could be an image of the Ethical Culture Fieldston School.
• Other images look relevant and don't appear to have copyvio issues.

Alright, that's a very rudimentary start. I'll try to do some work with the references tomorrow. ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:25, 3 July 2024 (UTC)