Talk:Robert Nimmo/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 22:05, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
Picking this one up. Review to follow. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:05, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
Lead
- "4th Australian Base Area" should be "4th Base Sub Area"
- Could we have his service number in the infobox? It was QX23797
- Remove the hard-coded image size from the infobox
World War I
- I don't see the need to put "A" Squadron in quotation marks.
- typo: "the trenches douth"
- "spurline" should be "spur". Could be linked to ridge?
Interwar period
World War II
- "4th Base Sub-Area" should be "4th Base Sub Area"
United Nations service and death
- Link gun salute
Duplicate links
- Queensland, colonel, second-in-command
References
- Londrey (2021) is giving me a CS1 maint: ref duplicates default (link) Delete the ref from the template, as it is already the default.
All looks very good. Just some minor points. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:57, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- All done, thanks Hawkeye. BTW, warm congrats on your election as lead coord! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:04, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've never been the lead coordinator before. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:54, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
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- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
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- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
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- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Great article.
- Pass or Fail:
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