Talk:Riverton–Belvidere Bridge/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments:

1. "holding a load of 8 tons (16000 pounds) from Warren County Route 620 (Water Street) in Belvidere to former Pennsylvania Route 709 on the Riverton side.", changed "from" to "and connecting".
2. Change "In 1825, on May 17" to "On May 17, 1825".
3. "the Riverton–Belvidere" sounds colliqual.
4. "did not accept any person to cross" sounds awkward.
5. "the Delaware" also sounds colliqual.
6. "Remnants of the bridge was hurdled downstream" needs to be reworded.
7. The sentence "The festivities were canceled, and disappointed the visitors." is short and awkward.
8. When in 1904 did the bridge transfer to the bridge corporation?
9. "extensive repairs began to the 25-year old structure" sounds awkward.
10. "The structure would face its final test in 1955": change "its final test" to "a test".
11. "The Commission replaced the flooring, repairing or replacing of certain steel portions of the bridge, blast-cleaning and repainting the structure." is a sentence fragment and needs to be reworded into a complete sentence.
12. Fix the link to Delaware Bridge in the crossings navbox.

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 17:35, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

Done with all. The last one is not a GA requirement.Mitch32^{(A fortune in fabulous articles can be yours!)} 20:01, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 20:25, 15 December 2009 (UTC)