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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
Taking a look now....you know the drill...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
If "Memento Mortem" is a foreign phrase...should it not be in italics?- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
As they rowed away, three mermaids attacked the boats and killed several of the group.- the subject changes oddly here - it'd be good to align the subjects between the clausesahd a go at this myself- The game also has quite the tonal shift at this time. I'm not sure how we would reword this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
to move in a 3D spacerewrite as "to move in a three dimensional space" (and link I think?)- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Pope faced preliminary issues at this stage.- this sentence is just sorta plonked there - is a bit vague, can it be removed?- Sure, done. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Any subsequent games cite this as an influence?- I haven't come across such a thing, but wouldn't be adverse to adding this if there were games that did.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
A nice read overall. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:40, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
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2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
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- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
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5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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- just minor quibbles really. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Cas, thanks for the review. Do you mind giving me a couple days to have a chance to look at these points/changes? Should be less than a week. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:46, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- no problemo Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:39, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Cas, I've answered all of the above, although some of the points I haven't actioned.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
- Forgot the ping. Casliber, I've addressed the above. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:43, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Cas, I've answered all of the above, although some of the points I haven't actioned.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
- no problemo Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:39, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Cas, thanks for the review. Do you mind giving me a couple days to have a chance to look at these points/changes? Should be less than a week. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:46, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
all Good....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:33, 3 September 2021 (UTC)