Talk:Reptar on Ice/GA1

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Reviewing article... CTJF83Talk 03:19, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• This might just be my personal preference, but from what I remember Angelica always refers to them as babies, so maybe consider changing infants to babies?....actually I see it both ways, so a consistent term would be good.

• I've changed all "infants" to "babies" as that is what Angelica calls them mostly. I left "infant" in the lead, though, as it's for their general age group and not the actual group they are. The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• Link 1 no longer links exactly to where it should

• Actually, it does. You see, for some reason it doesn't change the URL as you go to new pages, so I made the title the navigation you need to do. If you follow that, it'll lead to the link I'm using. Is that okay? The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• • • Ok, I see what you mean for this CTJF83Talk 18:06, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
• "Reptar had been used since season one, episode three, "At the Movies," as a satirical parody of the fictional Japanese monster, Godzilla." Is this sourced by reference number 7? (I can't check it) If so, please put a reference at the end of this sentence also.

• Done. The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• "Angelica is lean on only eating Reptar brand cereal" It might be my lack of vocabulary, but is lean the correct word here? Consider changing lean to insistent?

• Yeah, that sounds better - done. The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• "The ice show the babies attend mocks several different real life ice shows, including "Disney on Ice" and "Barney on Ice."" Is this sourced by #9? If so can you put a reference after Barney on ice, and if not, please find a source

• The whole paragraph is supported by ref 9. Is there a policy saying it has to be after each statement, not group of sentences that are supported by the ref? If so, I'll change it ASAP. The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

• • • I'm not sure if it is a policy or not, it's not a huge deal either way.
• Is Decade in Diapers the name of the DVD compilation (as I think it is), then it needs italics, not quotation marks.

• Done. The Flash ^{talk} 14:04, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

CTJF83Talk 03:42, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

Alright, great job! I'm going to pass it right now! CTJF83Talk 18:06, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! The Flash ^{talk} 20:06, 27 September 2009 (UTC)