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Reviewer: Retrohead (talk · contribs) 14:35, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
I'll review this as part of the GA cup. I'll ping the main contributor L1A1 FAL to notify him that I'm reviewing this.
- First thing I've noticed that the lead doesn't summarize the entire article. It has to be expanded.
- Expanded! The Rambling Man (talk) 09:25, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- The formatting seems alright, though I suggest to avoid using semicolons for the personnel. The band and the production should be placed in sub-sections.
- Tweaked! The Rambling Man (talk) 09:25, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- The reference formatting could be improved. I think it's better to write only Loudwire (not Loudwire.com as currently written) because the Wiki article is without the ".com" (and also add a link to its Wiki article). Same thing for Billboard.
- Improved! The Rambling Man (talk) 09:25, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- Check the external links. You have one dead link and several other that change path and need to be updated.
- You may add another review or two in the "Reception" to better reflect those featured in the table. You also might want to paraphrase a bit of those already there, because they are quite quote-heavy.
- Add the most scathing review for balance. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:25, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- Retrohead thanks for your comments. I'll try to address them as soon as I can and I'll also let you know when I think I'm done. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:14, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- Retrohead thanks for your comments and your patience, please let me know if there's anything more you need me to do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:25, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- Retrohead thanks for your comments. I'll try to address them as soon as I can and I'll also let you know when I think I'm done. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:14, 1 April 2016 (UTC)