Talk:Renata Reisfeld

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Renata Reisfeld, Professor of Chemistry, D.H.C. Enrique Berman Professor of Solar Energy, Institute of Chemistry, The Hebrew University, Jerusalem, Israel. Doctor Honoris Causa from the University of Lyon, France and from the University of Bucharest, Romania. Professor Honoris Causa from the Polish Academy of Science, Wrocław, Poland. Member of The Harvey M. Krueger Family Center for Nanoscience and Nanotechnology, Chemistry educator. 510 publications in the field of: Sol-Gel Glasses, Solid State Visible Lasers, Waveguide Visible Lasers, Nonlinear Optics, Nanoparticles in Glasses, Electrochromic Glasses, Photochromic Glasses, Gasochromic Glasses, Chemical Optical Sensors, Tunable Solid State Lasers, Luminescent solar concentrators, rare earth elements in Glasses, Energy Transfer, Fiber Optics, Radiative and Non-Radiative Transitions, Antireflecting Coatings for Optical Materials, Nobel Metal Nanoparticles and their interaction with fluorescent species.

This needs to be written in English prose, with a subject and verb in each sentence and citations. Wikipedia is not a resume posting site. W Nowicki (talk) 00:14, 14 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is much better, thanks. Ideally each paragraph should have at least one citation. Especially private information like family is often not included unless it is publicly known (and somewhere we can verify). The publication list is perhaps overkill. Any tenured professor has published many papers (although these seem to keep going). Not sure what the numbers are in square brackets? Perhaps some ordinal sequence number of her list, not sure it is relevant. Just maybe saying "over 500 papers" or something like that would suffice. At least I would say remove the ordinals. W Nowicki (talk) 19:48, 7 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]