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GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 18:32, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    prose: (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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1. Saunders was demobilised and returned to civilian life. Suggest - you reword this eg. Saunders retired or something along those lines

2. Saunders determined. Suggest - Saunders was determined

3. one of sons. Suggest - one of his sons

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 18:32, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. Good job Ian and Rupert. Thurgate (talk) 00:21, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Tks Thurgate! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:54, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]