Talk:Rambha Gandhi

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 05:48, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that Gujarati writer Rambha Gandhi was a member of the Central Board of Film Certification of India?~~ Source: "Jani, R. U. (1994). "ગાંધી, રંભાબહેન મનમોહન". In Thaker, Dhirubhai (ed.). Gujarati Vishwakosh (in Gujarati). VI (1st ed.). Ahmedabad: Gujarati Vishwakosh Trust. p. 266. OCLC 165216593.

Reviewed: Delford M. Smith

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 07:47, 23 September 2019 (UTC).[reply]

@Nizil Shah: The article is new enough and long enough. I do have some issues, however, with content. One is that I find the hook very boring. Another is that in the first paragraph, almost every sentence starts with "She". (Also, how do you participate in a court-martial for 31 years?) You will also need a QPQ to get this nomination complete, but I would first advise improving the writing quality of the article as it could use improvement. Raymie (t • c) 18:50, 26 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for review. I have requested copyedit at GOCE so someone will help. Meanwhile I will do QPQ and add ALT hook.-Nizil (talk) 12:17, 2 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1: ... that Gujarati writer Rambha Gandhi wrote and participated in more than 400 radio plays?

Nizil Shah, that hook is a huge improvement. It will need an inline citation at the end of its associated sentence in the article, which I see it does not presently have. I've tried to make the writing less repetitive, as well. Raymie (t • c) 06:06, 3 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Raymie: Inline citation added. Thanks for improving writing. QPQ is coming soon.-Nizil (talk) 06:11, 3 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Raymie: QPQ done. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 04:47, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Here is the tick! Raymie (t • c) 04:54, 12 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A fact from Rambha Gandhi appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 October 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Gujarati writer Rambha Gandhi wrote and participated in more than 400 radio plays?

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