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GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 02:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

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  • I copyedited the article (easier than writing out all the minor comments) here. Let me know if you disagree with any of the edits.
  • Image is fair use, appropriately tagged and used.
  • and being a member of the relay team in the latter., this wording here is clunky. Maybe just and for the relay team?
  • Dr. Pepper's team in the Capital City League Dr. Pepper as in the drink? Can you link that?
  • The non newspaper references need access-dates.
  • Spot check: 4, 7, 9, 13, 17, 20, 23, 25, 28
    • Ref #4 has a problem with the link. Newspapers.com says it is missing.
    • Keen also holds the record for longest completion in league history by a player who only completed one pass. is a really close paraphrase of the source. Can you reword a bit or just directly quote?

Looks really good. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:55, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.