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"digitally released as the lead single for her sixth studio album Yo (2019) on 27 September 2018" → "digitally released on 27 September 2018 as the lead single from her sixth studio album, Yo (2019)"
"A ballad, "Ra" lyrically" → "A ballad, the song lyrically"
"Upon its availability, "Ra" was met with generally positive reviews from music critics," → ""Ra" was met with generally positive reviews from music critics upon release," too many commas for the former and include what they praised, i.e "with a number of them pointing out its catchiness" as two of the reviews comment on it as catchy "a grower of a song and one that will get stuck in one's head, over time" does count as such
"was uploaded onto the singer's YouTube channel simultaneously with the digital release of "Ra"" → "was uploaded onto the singer's YouTube channel simultaneously with the digital release of the song"
"Inna further supported the single" → "Inna further supported the song"
"Commercially, it peaked at number 71 in Romania." → "It peaked at number 71 on the Romanian Airplay 100 in 2018."
Good work on this, just needs to be improved somewhat then it'll be passed. Till then, I'll put this On hold. Also, you need a credits and personnel section which can be created as they are numerous songwriters and producers, plus you know who mixed and mastered it. Plus the article would be better with an image included; I'm thinking you could add one of Inna to the left of the opening section with relevant text. --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:39, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake: Hi and thanks for another review! I have done all your suggestions, except where commented. I have also added a credits section, but not an extra image. That'll be too much since we already have the cover and the sample squeezed into a pretty short article. Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:32, 17 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Cartoon network freak: The GA criteria says audio as well as images for "when it's appropriate" so I will pass this once a issue I just spotted is resolved - for various in release history, cite multiple countries in the ref like "Deep in Love". This leads to the original release date in various under November 2018, so cite GB and US instead. Kyle Peake (talk) 05:36, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
On hold. Also, you need a credits and personnel section which can be created as they are numerous songwriters and producers, plus you know who mixed and mastered it. Plus the article would be better with an image included; I'm thinking you could add one of Inna to the left of the opening section with relevant text. --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:39, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
