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Alleged CV

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I don't see a violation. There seems to be an error. ~KvnG 00:05, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

About the lead

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I agree that it reads like an advertisement. In particular, I don't like the phrase "overcomes the limitations of the open-source tool." What limitations does it overcome? I'm new to Wikipedia, so I'm not sure if that's normal for a lead, but it still rubs me the wrong way. I've altered some of the wording in other areas, but if y'all have other ideas, I'm happy to hear them.

I also haven't touched the body at all. The unbroken paragraph makes it a bit difficult to read, which I'll fix later. Dinsfire24 (talk) 19:56, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]