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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:21, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images appropriately licensed
- The airfield had three grass runways: north/south which was 1,280 metres (4,200 ft), east/west which was 1,143 meters (3,750 ft) and south east/north west which was 1,005 meters (3,297 ft). Awkward. You never tell the readers that the measurement was length. Done – clarified the distances are length and tried to cut down on text.
- Only use the year on the first date; readers will know that all following dates are for that year until told different. Done
- Avro Ansons multi-role aircraft suggest changing the latter description to "trainers" Done
- However, the high frequency of flying and ground conditions led to drainage problems Suggest something like "The combination of ..." Done
- 1944 seems awfully early for the RAF to have any surplus Lancasters or Harvards Done – checked source and it only describes storage of aircraft so haev claridied
- Harvards were trainers, not fighters Done --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:04, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Thx811:--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:12, 16 July 2021 (UTC)