Talk:Pyjama shark/GA1
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 19:19, 19 May 2010 (UTC)
- "The pyjama shark is the larger and thicker-bodied member of the genus, growing to 1.1 m (3.6 ft) long and 7.9 kg (17 lb) or more in weight." This sentence confuses me, as what is it larger and thicker-bodied than?
- Changed to "...thicker-bodied of the two Poroderma species"
- Gurnard needs disambiguation.
- Done.
- Too bad, no picture.
Xtzou (Talk) 20:43, 19 May 2010 (UTC)
- Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 23:29, 19 May 2010 (UTC)
- Everything looks good, though I am not a specialist in the field. I do understand and enjoy most of the article. Xtzou (Talk) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
Clearly written and concise
- B. MoS compliance:
Complies with basic MoS
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
Reliable sources
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
Well referenced
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
Sets the context
- B. Focused:
Remains focused on the topic
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 14:01, 20 May 2010 (UTC)