Talk:Pure Heroine Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
I am not sure if the reference for the lead is necessary. References in the lead are usually reserved for controversial information, and I think that the part aobut the unreleased song should also be located and cited in the body of the article.

Background

Wikilink “Lorde” when you first mention her in the body of the article.
Remember to include ALT text for all of the images in the body of the article.
For this part (In an interview with Fuse), would it be possible to add a wikilink for “Fuse”? Is this a reference to Fuse (TV channel)?

Development

Everything looks good here.

Concert synopsis

For this part (The show was divided mainly into three parts.), I am uncertain if “mainly” is needed.
This part (The set included three screens of video that showed Lorde and her band.) needs a citation. The same comment applies to this part (She also cites her fear of aging as inspiration.).
For this part (was set in blue colors), maybe “shades of blue” would be better than “blue colors”.

Reception

Great work with this section.

Final comments

Wonderful work on this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this. One day, I should really work on a tour article lol. Aoba47 (talk) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Went ahead and fixed the article. Thank you so much for reviewing this! You should try to do some tour articles. I initially thought they would be a nightmare to do but they proved to be quite easy. De88 (talk) 21:32, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing everything! And maybe in the future. I will ✓ Pass this though now lol. Aoba47 (talk) 21:34, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]