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Disambiguation check: Done
Checklinks: 4 dead (Ref #'s 5, 10, 25, 19) Fixed
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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Prose is very good. Only one issue while reading, under Low pressure system in first paragraph a closing parentheses seems to be missing:
- ...within the Westerlies (a trough with large wavelength which extends through the (troposphere).
Fixed
Fix this and the dead links and I'll pass the article.
Reviewer: Lvi56 (talk) 05:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
- Found/replaced 3 of the 4 dead links. As it turns out, former ref 10 wasn't necessary as the other refs, particularly the one now at #10, described it well enough on their own. The parenthesis problem has been fixed. Thegreatdr (talk) 06:08, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good. I went ahead and fixed the red link that was under the High pressure section. I'll pass the article, good work!Lvi56 (talk) 06:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)