Talk:Pow (Elvana Gjata song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
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Yet another review of an old nom! --K. Peake 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good!
"and produced by" → "while produced by""was applauded by" → "received positive reviews from numerous" or something similar, per the usage of selected in the body and the small amount of criticsWikilink music videoRemove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK and the US introduction, as everyone knows where that place is"the song found commercial success," → "the song achieved success," and remove the Switzerland position per it being too low for lead notability
Background and composition
[edit]"on her social media in" → "on her Instagram in" per the source, with the wikilink"was noted by a critical commentary" → "was noted by critical commentary"Add a source at the end of the last sentence for the runtime"garnered positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"Remove website introduction to Illyrian Pirates and attribute the review to someone, preferably "the staff of". Also, what exactly makes this source reliable?"The website pointed out that its her" → "The staff went on to point out her"Remove website introductions to Dosja and Top Music, also attribute reviews to someone; you could use something like "a writer for" instead of the staff to be less reptitive"were the most focusing" → "are the most focusing""ending 22 February 2022," → "ending 20 February 2022," per the source
Promotion
[edit]Retitle to Music video per this being the only form of promotion listedWikilink music video on the img text and remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK"An accompanying music video for "Pow"" → "A music video for "Pow"""having been also credited as" → "who also received credit as"Remove wikilink on New York City"across the city, including at the" → "across the city, including the"Again, attribute the Illyrian Pirates review to someone"and commended the Gjata's fashion" → "and commended Gjata's fashion"Remove the word Greek before MikropragmataRemove introductions to Njeshi and Gazeta Metro, attributing the reviews to someone per earlier"similarly lauded her fashion noting" → "similarly lauded her style, noting"
Track listing
[edit]Remove this section because it is a one track single and the length is sourced in the body
Personnel
[edit]- Are there enough persons credited to create this section?
- Section created. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Charts
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks nearly perfect at 2.0%!!!
Remove Apple Music from the titles of ref 3's citations and add the countries in brackets for the publishersCite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 5- Again, what makes ref 6 a reliable source? I see no evidence of an editorial process or the source being mentioned by well-regarded ones.
- I have been in communication with the staff of the website, and it's a relatively new website, which I was told was created back in January/February 2022. Unfortunately, there is no other website dedicated to Albanian music, reviews and all related stuff at all. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- Remove or replace ref 7 per WP:SELFPUB
- Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Final comments and verdict
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On hold until all of the issues are fixed, after reviewing this decent article! --K. Peake 09:30, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hey @Kyle Peake:, thanks for your review. I solved your comments! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, I take no issue with the sources used now! --K. Peake 20:44, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hey @Kyle Peake:, thanks for your review. I solved your comments! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)