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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Yet another review of an old nom! --K. Peake 07:16, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "and produced by" → "while produced by"
  • "was applauded by" → "received positive reviews from numerous" or something similar, per the usage of selected in the body and the small amount of critics
  • Wikilink music video
  • Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK and the US introduction, as everyone knows where that place is
  • "the song found commercial success," → "the song achieved success," and remove the Switzerland position per it being too low for lead notability

Background and composition

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  • "on her social media in" → "on her Instagram in" per the source, with the wikilink
  • "was noted by a critical commentary" → "was noted by critical commentary"
  • Add a source at the end of the last sentence for the runtime
  • "garnered positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
  • Remove website introduction to Illyrian Pirates and attribute the review to someone, preferably "the staff of". Also, what exactly makes this source reliable?
  • "The website pointed out that its her" → "The staff went on to point out her"
  • Remove website introductions to Dosja and Top Music, also attribute reviews to someone; you could use something like "a writer for" instead of the staff to be less reptitive
  • "were the most focusing" → "are the most focusing"
  • "ending 22 February 2022," → "ending 20 February 2022," per the source

Promotion

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  • Retitle to Music video per this being the only form of promotion listed
  • Wikilink music video on the img text and remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
  • "An accompanying music video for "Pow"" → "A music video for "Pow""
  • "having been also credited as" → "who also received credit as"
  • Remove wikilink on New York City
  • "across the city, including at the" → "across the city, including the"
  • Again, attribute the Illyrian Pirates review to someone
  • "and commended the Gjata's fashion" → "and commended Gjata's fashion"
  • Remove the word Greek before Mikropragmata
  • Remove introductions to Njeshi and Gazeta Metro, attributing the reviews to someone per earlier
  • "similarly lauded her fashion noting" → "similarly lauded her style, noting"

Track listing

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  • Remove this section because it is a one track single and the length is sourced in the body

Personnel

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  • Are there enough persons credited to create this section?
Section created. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks nearly perfect at 2.0%!!!
  • Remove Apple Music from the titles of ref 3's citations and add the countries in brackets for the publishers
  • Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 5
  • Again, what makes ref 6 a reliable source? I see no evidence of an editorial process or the source being mentioned by well-regarded ones.
I have been in communication with the staff of the website, and it's a relatively new website, which I was told was created back in January/February 2022. Unfortunately, there is no other website dedicated to Albanian music, reviews and all related stuff at all. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

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Hey @Kyle Peake:, thanks for your review. I solved your comments! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]