Talk:Pouyannian mimicry
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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 18:55, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 22:06, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- AryKun Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:59, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- The lead's a bit thin; it's basically just the definition and Pouyanne's original observation. I'd add some more details about the details of the phenomenon from In orchids.
- Added.
"three species, a mimic" Should be a (semi?) colon or something.
- Edited.
- I like the graph, great visual representation.
- Thank you.
- Do no plants other than orchids show Pouyannian mimicry?
- Seems not. If it is one day found in other families, it'll likely be chemical and tactile, not visual.
- "One mechanism" mechanism for what?
- glossed.
- "Floral mimicry...mating signals." this bit seems better suited at the start of Definition.
- Rearranged.
- "Such plants" Has no referent since previous sentence doesn't mention any specific type of plant.
- The earlier mention is "Flowering plants that do not produce such rewards".
- "at the population level" Not quite sure what this means, do you mean "at the level of individual populations" or thereabouts?
- Yes.
- "pollinators involve" to "pollinators involves"
- Done.
- Any link for sensory trap?
- Added.
- Not required for GA ig, but I'd add translated titles for the French articles.
- Added.
- What makes South Coast Orchid Society an RS?
- They are specialists in their field, and very unlikely to be lying about the subject.
- Refs 1, 3, 6, 11, 12, and 13 look like they have page ranges too long for the claims they're used to cite.
- Standard practice when citing scientific papers is just to cite the whole article.
- Will spot-check later, that's all I have for now. AryKun (talk) 20:02, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks.
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