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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
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- "The song, which was released" followed by "The song was released" is repetitive.
Done Is "Published" better? EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "it only managed to chart" it only charted in...
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "and was only certified in that country" I imagine that to be obvious since it only charted in Denmark.
- I've removed it, so Done. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Danmark" Denmark.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Could link YouTube.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- " a radio single[2] on 12 September,[3]" might as well place the two refs together after the punctuation.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "The track was written as the first track" not great, rephrase to avoid repetition of "the ... track".
Done Reworded, should look better known, though I really don't know what is wrong with repeating "the".EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Infobox should say Producer(s).
- I'm confused here. How do you make it say producer(s), cause I've been looking all over the template page and can't find how to do it. Do you know? I don't think this should even be a problem. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "pop song[2]" similarly, place this after punctuation, it won't harm the reader to have to wait a few words for the ref.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "an E Major key" major.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Lene's vocal" surnames please.
Done She has been under her stage name "Lene" for some of her solo release, so I don't see why this is a problem. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Rene Dif's bridge is cut from the 3.5 single edit of the song" ditto, and what's a 3.5 single edit?
Done changed EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "The song has been certified gold" by whom?
Done by the IFPI EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Time Magazine is actually Time.
Done changed it. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think the link you use for Idolater is what you're after.
- What are you trying to say? EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Oh, wait. I had it disambung it.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 17:22, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
- Oh, wait. I had it disambung it.
- What are you trying to say? EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- ""How R U Doin?".[15]" no need for the spare full stop.
Done I think i fixed it
- Denmark again.
Done fixed it. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Aqua members as they appear in the video." no need for full stop, not a complete sentence.
Done changed EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Chart positions table is pointless being sortable.
Done fixed it EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Sales/shipment but the article says it was 300k streams which is very different.
Done Changed to "sales of 300,000 units"
- "Accessed from... " or "Retrieved..."? Be consistent in the refs.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Is it Allmusic or Allmusic? Be consistent.
Done I've added Rovi Corporation as publisher to make it clear. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
- Ref 10 has no accessdate. Check others.
Done added accessdates EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
A few issues, so I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:55, 5 August 2013 (UTC)