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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 20:10, 1 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A source indicating what the original air date of the episode was would be nice.
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Any other direction credits that can be included here other than animation? I know comprehensive isn't as much of a strict thing for good articles as for featured articles, but I'm just saying.
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:22, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"is the fifth episode" since its episode 5a, change this to "is the first segment of the fifth episode"
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The episode received positive reviews upon release." then where are the reviews "upon release", cause no of these are shown here, only those that were published 2003 or later. Upon release would be shortly before or on August 14, 1999.
- Done? Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The plot section needs the character's actor name in brackets "()" to comply with Wikipedia's Manual of Style, cause I'm not seeing any throughout the section.
- But the article is an episode article meaning it's part of the SpongeBob SquarePants article. Characters should not be introduced and that's why it doesn't have a "Cast" section. See this for example.
I would suggest that, for organization reasons, the airing and release info in the production section should be put in a separate release section.
- Releases about episode articles is not necessarily need. These can be merged or added at the production section. I think this and this would be good examples.
Any info about the episode ratings?
- None. I don't have any sources or reports about that. :\
ref 2: ''Hogan's Alley'' --> ''[[Hogan's Alley (magazine)|Hogan's Alley]]''
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Link DVD Talk in ref 4
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Link TVShowsOnDVD.com in ref 5
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Link About.com in ref 10
- Done Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Date is missing for ref 11
- Fixed Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be happy to pass this once these issues are resolved. 和DITOR E tails 20:10, 1 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much EditorE for the review! I hope everything's OK now and I sure wish it will pass! Thanks again and have a nice day! :) Mediran (t • c) 11:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA! YAY! 和DITOR E tails 14:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks EditorE! Well appreciated! :) Mediran (t • c) 09:28, 3 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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