Talk:Pink Pony Club

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Review: January 2, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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The Abbey

Why does the lead of this article state that the protagonist in the song is dancing at a "gay strip club"? The story behind the writing of the song is well done further down the article and clearly states that it's based on the desire to be a clothed go-go dancer at the Abbey. They Abbey is a gay bar, not a strip club. While I can understand a listener thinking it relates to stripping because of the apology to the mother, the story here is clear. It's just being a go-go dancer at a lighthearted venue that is certainly a nightclub but very, very far from an adult/strip venue. 70.187.141.56 (talk) 16:12, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. Arconning (talk) 03:06, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 03:08, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 03:20, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Nascar9919 Here are my short comments, I probably won't be able to promote it as soon as possible as I'm going on a trip. I'll try to promote it as soon as I can once I get back home! Arconning (talk) 14:28, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning: Hey there! Got around to your comments. No worries about the wait; I understand it's the holidays, after all. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Will review in a few days^

Prose and MoS

Lead and infobox

The mention of the song being a sleeper hit alongside the other songs could be included in the commercial performance section.

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Probably mention the song being a synth-pop song in the composition section so that the source could be omitted in the infobox.

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Could clarify that Amstutz is Roan using parentheses.

Not done. I thought using the names used in the songwriters section and then wikilinking them was how it was done? See Hot to Go! as an example.

Background and composition

No issues here.

Writing and release

"leather daddies", this could be wikilinked to Leather subculture based on the context.

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

No issues here.

Live performances

The song has also been featured on the online video concert series NPR Tiny Desk., could this sentence be rewritten as I don't think I've heard mentions of NPR's Tiny Desk Concerts written as such.

Done? Let me know if you want it tweaked further. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performances

both the Recorded Music NZ, correct me if I'm wrong but shouldn't it be without the "the"?

Done. Feel dumb for forgetting that. Haha. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Charts, certifications, and Release history

No issues.

Media

Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.
Captions are suitable.

Refs

Earwig mostly picks up quotes.
Random ref check: 1, 7, 14, 21, 24, 38, 45. All good and reliable, cites the information written.

Misc

No ongoing edit war, pretty neutral on the writing, broad enough information relating to the topic.

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