Talk:Pin Mill
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There is a piece of industrial equipment commonly know as a pin-mill. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oysvorf (talk • contribs) 08:49, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
There is a lack of objectivity in the parts of the article describing the houseboats. If this controversy needs to be described at all, perhaps it should be given a separate section. Certainly some of the personal opinions should be removed. Kutya elet ez (talk) 16:29, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
While there is referenced material here, the article betrays an obvious point of view about the house boats: "a squalid, unattractive, dirty, unhygienic and illegal site for house boats"; "the appearance of a slum"; "revolting stench", etc. All these may be true, but it would be better if the problems were expressed in a more detached manner, preferably quoting local council reports or similar. As I said above, those aspects could be put in their own section, rather than overwhelming the primary content of the article.
Is there someone with knowledge of the area, who is prepared to edit this article? (...but perhaps someone not too closely involved with local politics.) Kutya elet ez (talk) 19:12, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
- The POV content and unsourced opinions were deleted by another editor last month in September. Therefore I have today removed the NPOV tag at the top of the section. Regards, Kind Tennis Fan (talk) 22:12, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
You got there before me. I had been waiting to see if anyone wanted to reverse or modify the edits. Nobody has, so it seems reasonable to remove the warning. Thanks. Kutya elet ez (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 14:42, 8 October 2017 (UTC)