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DateProcessResult
August 27, 2013Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 12:41, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Alrighty then, I'm taking a look at this article. --Khanassassin 12:41, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • ""Adventure Time" is the name of an animated short created by Pendleton Ward, as well as the pilot to the Cartoon Network series Adventure Time." => ""Adventure Time" is an animated short created by Pendleton Ward, as well as the pilot to Cartoon Network series of the same name." --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Plot

  • "...giving Pen a kiss, which he enjoys but greatly embarrasses him." => "...giving Pen a kiss; he enjoys, but is also greatly embarrassed." Something like that reads better, I think. --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Characters

  • "One of the main protagonists of the short." Not a big issue, but since there's only two protagonists in the short/series, Pen/Finn and Jake, shouldn't you write "one of two main protagonists"? --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Production


Release and reception

  • "However, the network was not happy with this story, and specifically asked for an episode that contained the same elements..." "Elements" sort of doesn't fit in the "what made it so special" sentence, lol. Just write "things" or something. Or don't, again, it's just a personal preference. :) --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

*""The Enchiridion,..." You forgot the second quote mark for the episode title. :) --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]


References

  • Seems legit.


External links


Don't see any more issues here. Fix these up and a promotion will come. :) --Khanassassin 13:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I think I got everything. Thanks for reviewing this. BTW, I'll try to get your article reviewed tonight.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:42, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
You forgot a little of the "protagonists" thing, but it's cool, I fixed it. I give this articleof a notoriously overrated show (sorry)a Pass! :) Congrats, brotha. --Khanassassin 14:58, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Requested move 16 November 2018

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: Move to Adventure Time (short film). There's a clear consensus here that the previous title isn't kosher. Several options were suggested, and Adventure Time (short film) was the best supported. While this disambiguator isn't specifically listed in the naming conventions, as IJBall noted, this is not necessarily a reason to avoid it. Another popular option, Adventure Time (film), is unavailable as it's already a redirect to a proposed film adaptation, and several participants here felt it would be confusing as a disambiguator anyway. Feel free to start a new RM if a better disambiguator is identified. Cúchullain t/c 14:33, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]



Pilot (Adventure Time)Adventure Time (pilot)Adventure Time (short film) I'm not sure why this was moved to begin with. While the short is the pilot to the series, it only became so post facto. When it was initially released, it was simply called "Adventure Time". As such, having it labelled like it is now is incorrect. @Matt14451: I'm curious as to why you moved it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:46, 16 November 2018 (UTC) --Relisting. IffyChat -- 19:59, 24 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The disambiguator "(short film)" is not sanctioned at WP:NCFILM. --woodensuperman 13:47, 22 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Not being listed in a "naming convention" doesn't mean a disambiguator should never be used – that's what RM's are for: in an RM, consensus may determine that a "non-standard disambiguator" is actually the best choice in a specific circumstance. This may be one of those circumstances... --IJBall (contribstalk) 15:26, 25 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.