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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:24, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Image: This really isn't needed and doesn't have a good rationale
  • Intro: I would move the bit about the drums to the third paragraph and add a bit about guest stars to the first
  • Synopsis: "Dwight doesn't…" -> "Dwight does not…"
  • Synopsis: "his and Pam's song." Maybe add what that song is. I can't remember off the top of my head…
  • Production: "his fifth such credit for the series" Is there a cite for this?
  • Production: "It features the first wedding from the series." I feel this is a tad clunky. Maybe "The episode is the first of the series to revolve around a wedding."
  • Reception: graded the episode with an A -> graded the episode with an "A" Add quotes
  • References: Ref. 5 and 11 have quote issues
  • Categories: Make sure they're in alphabetical order. Just a little nit picky. ;)

That's all I could find. Good article! On hold.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:10, 24 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]