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Orria, I undid some recent changes because there seemed to be quite a few problems, including signing the article. The article read like a narrative, the lede style was removed, the sources used were not reliable sources. I appreciate all the work done - perhaps you want to work together and see if we can incorporate your knowledge according to Wikipedia's manual of style. Depreciated (talk) 04:18, 27 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Awkward syntax, citation needed

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It is unclear what the last sentence wants to say: “While it's possible that pheromones trigger a romantic response in humans,[1][5][6] it's more widely accepted that the Major histocompatibility complex genes, which control the immune response and effective resistance against pathogens.”

The syntax is poor and a citation is needed for the claim (?) regarding “histocompatibility complex genes”. 72.141.228.22 (talk) 22:21, 28 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It probably is best to remove it if the original author won't correct it. Gigantopithecus Lover (talk) 12:40, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]