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recent changes: March 06
[edit]Nice changes to this page! One issue though: I removed this line from the very end of this article:
"Further, it has been pointed out that the Pentagon is a taxpayer-driven institution and therefore is not an issue of conflict or hypocrisy, nor should reflect any ideology simply based on a source of funding."
I did so because it sounds like it is trying to prove someting, and really might need to be rewritten to sound more matter-of-fact. This is just my opinon, and maybe whomever put this quote on can just make it sound a bit less like someting is trying to be proven.
April deletion of link to Discussion Chomsky Chapter in 'Do As I Say...'
[edit]Whoever deleted the external link to the discussion of the chomsky chapter 'do as i say...', please justify why the link should be removed before you do so. This link contains mere unbiased commentary on that best selling book, and therefore seems entirely relevant as a link on this wiki page. Your merely deleting the page makes it appears as if you are trying to hide information rather than allow for mere discussion of Schweizer's book.
May 11 changes -
[edit]Since someone didn't see why accepting money from the Pentagon would be hypocritical for Chomsky, I spelled out exactly how Schwiezer made the connection. Also, it appears that the person who posted Chomsky's pick-and-choose reply is more familiar with Chomsky's books than they are with Schweizer's. Since I've actually read Do As I Say..., I thought I'd add some facts and background to the article. I also changed the part about Schweizer "labeling" his subjects as liberals. They are widely recognized as being influential to, or leaders of, the American liberal movement. Any attempt to deny that they are liberals is self-delusional.
Whomever put all the Chomsky quotations in this page really should cite them specifically, cuz if they don't, it just looks like they could all be made up: hey, Chomsky said this, said that, said the other thing, but I won't or can't tell you where and when he said it. The person who put these in really needs to cite them so we all can check them, or else they shoudl be deleted. They are hugely important.
quotations
[edit]I created the May 11 changes, so I will add the research footnote from Schweizer's book. If you really want to check the accuracy of what Schweizer says about Chomsky, perhaps you should read the book instead of depending on other Wikipedia contributors? Just a thought.
Author
[edit]Re: the repeated deletion of the word "author" from the lead section. He has written books, therefore he is an author. I'm not sure why this is controversial. Perhaps you think that this is part and parcel of being a researcher? Not all researchers are authors. And if you look at the bibliography, the books were not published by the organization where he is a research fellow. --GentlemanGhost (converse) 19:56, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Controversy & Criticism Section
[edit]I just added some important paragraphs about Schweizer's spotty track record as a researcher. Unfortunately, the article is now out of balance. It would be good to have some more material about his other work. The Career section isn't really encyclopedic at all. It's essentially an annotated bibliography with some bullet points from his bio.
Also, it's very unclear who he is married to. Is his wife's name Rhonda or Rochelle?Trumpetrep (talk) 18:23, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
- I am looking at this by Media Matters for America. It appears that (a) Peter Schweizer was described as a "Republican activist and strategist" (should not he be mentioned as such in intro?), and (b) he is notorious for inaccurate reporting (should not the numerous examples of his inaccurate reporting from this source be described on this page?). My very best wishes (talk) 18:15, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
Career Section
[edit]Schweitzer's invaluable work on Congressional insider trading is woefully underrepresented in this section. (60 Minutes covered it twice!) Moreover, this whole section is nothing more than a listicle culled from his various bios. Surely, there must be someone willing to bulk this section up. I'd do it myself, but every time I try to add to this article, it keeps getting reverted to completely outdated versions.
Should we protect this page and build a consensus on future edits?Trumpetrep (talk) 01:47, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
Just look at the article's history this evening! Good faith edits have been obliterated, and once his latest book is published, the article will only become a bigger target. It's better to make sure it is well-balanced and sourced to inoculate it against partisans from either side who will want to warp it to suit their needs. I've already messaged you about further edits towards this end. In my view, the article would benefit from some stronger evidence of Schweizer's accomplishments, particularly his impact on political ethics (which, obviously, is the subject of his latest book!).Trumpetrep (talk) 04:21, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
- This seems to be anachronistic to our previous discussion. Can you be a little more specific about problems you've developed since you had the "last edit" the other night? GraniteSand (talk) 01:19, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
GraniteSand needs to explain why an entire section was deleted and on what basis. - Cwobeel (talk) 21:58, 26 April 2015 (UTC)
- Save us the third-person theatrics; you can read an edit summary. GraniteSand (talk) 01:17, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
- May it is you that need to drop the theatrics? Edit summaries are not enough when you delete an entire section. - Cwobeel (talk) 01:22, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
- Cwobeel, there has been quite a bit of back and forth on this article. It might not all be clear from the edit summary, but we discussed the best way to balance Schweizer's significant career accomplishments against his equally significant factual errors. There was a Controversy & Criticism section, but it was determined that the better way to handle that material was to interweave it into his Career section.Trumpetrep (talk) 21:19, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
After another round of "undos", I created a compromise edit, where the "Criticism" section was removed, but the Media Matters link was placed in the "Clinton Cash" section. Media Matters is nakedly partisan, and that article is just an index of previous reporting from MM and other outlets. Nevertheless, it keeps getting inserted into this page. So, perhaps, the best thing to do is give it some context and let it stand for a while.Trumpetrep (talk) 15:35, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
- I see no reason to put it into the CC section, there's nothing about CC in the link. As I said in my summary, it's just a cheat sheet for talking points which can be used to attack Schweizer in the press. It's literally an oppo-research memo, that's what MMfA does, among other things. It's for this reason that finding a place for it in an encyclopedic BLP isn't intuitive or easy. GraniteSand (talk) 00:57, 4 May 2015 (UTC)
You know that I agree with you. It just seems like it will keep getting put back in whenever we take it out. So, it seems like the better way to control that is to either protect the page from random edits or give the link better context than just slapping it up in a "Controversy & Criticism" section as these folks keep doing.Trumpetrep (talk) 12:28, 4 May 2015 (UTC)
Plagiarism allegations
[edit]The Daily Beast has done a comprehensive comparison of Schweizer new book on the Bidens and has found more than a dozen examples where text was lifted from Wikipedia and combed into the book's text. This clearly seems like something that should be included in the article.
Error regarding corrections to "Clinton Cash"
[edit]Snooganssnoogans has seen fit to revert—without any edit summary, any response to my edit summary, or any comment on this page—my edit regarding the false and uncited claim in Wikipedia voice that: "The book was found to contain several factual errors, including that then-Secretary of State Clinton had veto power to stop the sale of Uranium One to a Russian state-owned company."
As I noted in my edit summary, no such claim is made in any cited source. The FactCheck.org article clearly refers to an April 26, 2015 television program: "what [Schweizer] said when he appeared on Fox News Sunday, where he discussed the uranium deal and his upcoming book" [emphasis mine]. Every other cited source either refers to or purports to "fact check" statements by President Trump or different material from Schweizer.
Indeed, the reason no source claims what the article currently does is because Schweizer's book never claimed that Hillary Clinton had "veto power" at CFIUS—only that she could have had the decision "kicked up to the president". Every other cited source, to the best of my understanding are rebutting either Trump's comments or (in the case of FactCheck) Schweizer's comments on Fox News Sunday, April 26, 2015.
I'm happy to be corrected, but assuming my edit did actually improve the article by removing false (and redundant) information, this was tedious and tiresome. If Snooganssnoogans, an exceedingly experienced user, would have simply followed longstanding guidance and not reverted my edit without either responding to my edit summary or discussing it on the Talk page, it would have saved me a great deal of trouble and time.
Accordingly, as the reversion reinserted demonstratively false and uncited information in Wikivoice, I will undo it, pending a proper response or explanation from Snooganssnoogans. Appreciatively, ElleTheBelle 18:39, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
- You were correct to say that the phrase "had veto power" wasn't in the book but why did you delete the rest of the sentence with the RS? The book did contain several factual errors that the publisher had to correct. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 19:30, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
- I appreciate the question. I removed the beginning of the sentence—"The book was found to contain several factual errors"—because the very next paragraph said precisely the same thing, but more completely: "Several weeks after the book's initial publication, Harper Collins and the author made several corrections to the Kindle edition of the book. Schweizer corrected 'seven or eight' passages that were revealed to be inaccurate after the book was released." I believe the RS is cited elsewhere in the article. Hope that makes sense—thanks! ElleTheBelle 20:53, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
To follow up: the stuff remaining in the article about "veto power" is trivial and irrelevant. That Schweizer misspoke once in a single interview—a slip which he promptly acknowledged and explained through a spokesperson—isn't relevant and adds nothing to an understanding of the actual subject of the section: the book. Furthermore, it's clearly in the wrong place. It's highly confusing to include a misstatement made in an interview about the book—an error that is not in the book—in a section about actual errors in the book. And, if moved to somewhere it was relevant, it would also need to include Schweizer's response through a spokesperson: that he hadn't meant a literal "veto power" but that Clinton could have, in his words, "halt[ed] the deal" and "forced the issue to the president’s desk". Both his response and his book are correct on this point; as the "fact check" itself explains, Clinton could have "recommend[ed] suspension or prohibition of the transaction", thus preventing the deal and sending it to Obama. To my mind, it's both pointless and confusing-as-hell to have an encyclopedia entry about a book include an author's verbal misstatement in an interview that contradicts correct material in his book—especially given that he did make actual errors in the book which required correction. In conclusion: for all the above reasons, I'm removing it, but am happy to consider adding it back in—along with Schweizer's response—if there's somewhere it could conceivably be considered relevant. Thanks! ElleTheBelle 22:00, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- It wasn't one interview, it was numerous ones (see the Washington Post cite I just added), at least two of them on national television (Fox News and ABC). Quoting WaPO:
Schweitzer was pressed on that point yesterday by both Chris Wallace and George Stephanopoulos, and he gave essentially the same answer both times. Here’s what he said on Fox News Sunday: "Well, here’s what’s important to keep in mind: it was one of nine agencies, but any one of those agencies had veto power. So, she could have stopped the deal. So, what’s interesting about this, of all those nine agencies, who was the most hawkish on these types of issues? Hillary Clinton."
That's some pretty specific "misspeaking". And here he is "misspeaking" on ABC: Transcript. With all that "meticulous" research, Schweizer didn't know that "Jose Fernandez, a former assistant secretary of state, represented the department on the committee. He told the Times: 'Mrs. Clinton never intervened with me on any C.F.I.U.S. matter.'" The mention of the promotion is exactly where it needs to be—with the advance copies given to media outlets which were also part of the promotion package. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:34, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Department of Veterans Affairs Police being Armed
[edit]I saw you on Sawn Hannity tonight talking about the VA having weapons and ammunition. The Department of Veterans has had Armed VA Police Officers having weapons and ammunition since 2000. They are considered Federal Police Officers and attend L.E.T.C. , an eight week training Academy in North Little Rock Arkansas. There are small Police forces at each VA Hospital with up to 15 or more Officers. Small VA clinics usually have two Officers. I retired from the VA Police in Shreveport, La. In 2020, where I retired as the Chief. Each VA Police Officer is required to shoot 200 rounds of ammunition each quarter and we were assigned AR-15’s in 2019. The reason VA armed there Officers was because 8 VA Security Guards were killed and VA realized that they could not wait for Local Law Enforcement to respond and realized they needed to have Armed Officers to protect Veterans and Employees. I am a Vietnam Veteran, Retired after 28 years with Shreveport Police and worked 16 years with Department of Veteran Affairs retiring at age 71. I am also a proud Republican and just wanted to let you know why the VA uses so much 9mm and 5.56 ammo. Gary Alderman 318-349-4453. 47.210.22.89 (talk) 02:22, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
Profiles in Corruption
[edit]I can't find his writing here, yet it redirected me to this article. Ionic Ludicrous (talk) 21:18, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
Persistent vandalism in lead
[edit]IP addresses keep removing "far-right" from Breitbart News. The Breitbart article calls its subject "far-right" in the first sentence of its lead, backed up by numerous RS in the body. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 15:47, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
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