Talk:Perfectionist (album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 14:57, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Happy to take this review on, my full review will be here shortly! WikiRedactor (talk) 14:57, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

You're really nice. Thank you. — prism △ 15:08, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

I was about to take this one before WikiRedactor did :P. Best of luck! Snuggums (talk • contributions) 15:19, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Thank you anyway! — prism △ 16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

• Some disambiguation links to correct.
• One external link to correct.

• The DABs were corrected however I couldn't find any working archive link for HMV so I added a dead link tag. — prism △ 16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Introduction

• "In the United States, where it has sold 14,000 copies as of September 2013, it reached number 129; in the United Kingdom, it peaked at number 134." The U.S. chart position could be a bit more clearly worded. How about something like "In the United States, it reached number 129, and has sold 14,000 copies there as of September 2013; in the United Kingdom, it peaked at number 134."

• Done

Composition

• Unless I missed something in the review, reference #19 (Natalia Kills: 'Mirrors') doesn't mention a falsetto note.

• Forgot to add the AllMusic ref. Done

Track listing

• Can you note that the credits are adapted from the liner notes?

• Done

Charts

• The Canadian Billboard reference doesn't pull up a chart position in the country.

• Changed to Jam! website

• Neither does the German reference; Ultratop lists the German position though, so you can just replace that citation with a link to Ultratop.

• Done

Release history

• The Canadian HMV reference redirects back to their homepage.

• I'm going to report a dead link on that one, since archive pages for it get an HTTP 302 issue.

• The Brazlian Livaria Cultura reference doesn't seem to give a specific release date.

• Removed

References

• Can you organize the references with {{reflist|30em}}?

• Done

• There is a parameter in reference #7 (Wommanequin – EP by Natalia Cappuccini) that has an unknown parameter.

• Corrected

After these corrections are addressed, I'll check back in! WikiRedactor (talk) 15:27, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

WikiRedactor, I think everything's done! :) — prism △ 15:56, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Happy to pass the article, nicely done! WikiRedactor (talk) 16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

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