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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 18:47, 26 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]


You took a look at some of my older nominations, so I thought I'd try doing the same as to help clear out some of these. Namcokid47 (talk) 18:47, 26 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, a couple of things:

  • Because both of these sections are so short, I suggest merging the Gameplay and Development sections into one.
    • Done for this and the impact section.
  • Per this discussion, screenshots are not allowed in the infobox, so I would move it to the Gameplay section. The game doesn't have an official box from what I can see, so I would say using an iamge of the cartridge is okay.
    • I don't find that the discussion is really relevant here. The arguments made don't really apply, as the cartridge is not likely to be the most well-known aspect of the game. This is certainly an exception to the rule.
  • Impact and rarity can be merged together too. I also think the line "Most of the cartridges were discarded due to disinterest by their recipients" could be moved into the development paragraph.

Namcokid47 (talk) 20:03, 26 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It's looking a lot better now. Few more things:

  • The Apprentice link needs to be fixed, leads to a DAB page at the moment.
  • Pipe link for Coca-Cola Company should be removed so it matches with the lead.
  • "Most of the cartridges were discarded due to disinterest by their recipients" should probably be moved into the History section.

Namcokid47 (talk) 19:13, 27 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]