Talk:Pavle Đurišić/Archive 2
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an understandable act of mass terror
Solved:the edit was properly sourced
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@Peacemaker67, will you please be so kind to explain this edit and why did you described an act of mass terror as understandable?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 21:31, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
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Report of the International Commission to Inquire into the Causes and Conduct of the Balkan War (1914)
- "However, the Italians regained control over all towns and communication routes within six weeks, assisted by Muslim and Albanian irregular forces who were motivated by atrocities committed against their people by Serbian and Montenegrin troops during their withdrawal from northern and central Albania after the Balkan Wars."
Above mentioned assertion about events in 1941 is supported with "Report of the International Commission to Inquire into the Causes and Conduct of the Balkan War (1914)" published in 1914.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 12:14, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- addressed. Peacemaker67 (talk) 13:08, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- No its not. You used statements published in opposition communist newspapers Radničke Novine (Workers newspapers) which are cited in the report. The International Commission stated that "The Commission was not able to verify those statements...".
- You created another problem with the following sentence you inserted into the article:
- "These irregulars remembered the Montenegrin occupation of Albania in 1913."
- It is absurd to justify Albanian collaboration with Italians with six months Montenegrin occupation of Shkoder taking in consideration that Italia occupied all of Albania in period 1914-1943 (with short breaks).--Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:11, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- "However, the Italians regained control over all towns and communication routes within six weeks, assisted by Muslim and Albanian irregular forces. These irregulars remembered the Montenegrin occupation of Albania in 1913,[4] when in the final phase of the Balkan Wars, Serbian and Montenegrin troops had committed atrocities against the Muslim and Albanian population.[5]"
- WP:SYNTH says: "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources." The above presented text is synthesis of published material to advance a new position. Precisely to imply a conclusion that Albanian and Muslim irregulars assited Italian forces to regain control over Berane and other towns in Montenegro because of the Balkan wars events. That is not explicitly stated by any of the sources. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 09:31, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
- I have removed the Balkans Commission material and the tag. I will re-visit later. Peacemaker67 (talk) 06:13, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
Refugees from Bosnia and Herzegovina fleeing from ustasha terror
Solved:All three major grievances against the Italians explained as per source.
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The text of the source, page 139, says that there was an influx of 25,000 refugees into Montenegro. The source says they "constituted a great economic burden". Out of that number only 5,000 were from Kosovo and Vojvodina. Rest of them were from other parts of the Kingdom of Yugoslavia, like "refugees fleeing ustasha terror in the border areas of south-east Bosnia and Herzegovina". It is wrong to state that grievances against Italians were caused "particularly regarding the expulsion of Montenegrin people from the Kosovo region and Vojvodina" because it is not what source says. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:24, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
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When Đurišić arrived to Belgrade in 1943?
Solved:Information that Đurišić arrived to Serbia in November 1943 is added to the article.
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Pavlowitch says, page 195:
I propose to change the existing sentence: He was sent to a prisoner of war camp in Galicia from which he later escaped, reportedly in August 1943, and after some time reached Serbia. into:
--Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:17, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
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To Slovenia or to Greece?
Solved:Information that Đurišić wanted to retreat trough Albania to Greece added.
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The text of the article says:
Pawlovich says (page 241):
Maybe Đurišić indeed argued strongly for all remaining Chetnik troops to move to Slovenia when he already reached northeastern Bosnia, but I think it would be good to present his initial position which was in favor of Greece instead of Slovenia.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:51, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
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Family details
Was his father's name Ilija?
Source:
- "Pavle Đurišić, Lovro Hacin, Juraj Špiler" - Radoje Pajović, Dušan Željeznov, Branislav Božović - Centar za informacije i publicitet, 1987, page 12 (Na početku ovog stoljeća Pavlov otac Ilija)
--Antidiskriminator (talk) 17:17, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
- Can't help you there, can't read the lingo and so have no idea whether that is a reliable published source or not. If you believe it is, please insert it into the article with an inline citation in the same form as those already used. Thanks, Peacemaker67 (talk) 00:16, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- Reliability always depend on the context. This source is far from being reliable regarding WWII activities of Đurišić, but when it comes to the name of his father, I think it can be accepted, since there are many other web based sources which confirm that his fathers name was Ilija. Serbs have custom to name their sons against their fathers or ancestors. Taking in consideration that Đurišić's son name was Ilija that is also additional confirmation.
- There is no mention of Đurišić's son Ilija in this article. I think this article should be better researched before A class nomination because A class biography article about 20th century person should contain family details, like family origin, name of the father, mother, son.... After reading this article I was sure that Đurišić was not married and had no children. Maybe many of sources about his family are not RS for his WWII activities, but that does not mean they should not be used for such simple indisputable assertions about his family. A paragraph within early life section would be enough, together with a couple of sentences in the aftermath section. Any thoughts?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 09:15, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I think it is very strange that you are suggesting that this article is not ready for A-Class because we don't know the names of his father, wife and children. He is not notable for having had a wife and children. Inclusion of basic information about his upbringing has been done, and in fact was done during the GA nomination at the request of assessors. In all the texts I own that mention him, not one mentions his family at all. The information that has been obtained by PRODUCER is all in Serbian. Personally, if Google Translate is any measure, this article you have suggested as a source for this information is questionable at least. I fail to see the necessity of including chapter and verse about his family, unless the decisions or actions for which he is notable were made because of his family (and the sources make that connection). Peacemaker67 (talk) 09:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I don' agree with you. This is biography article. I already explained this point to you when we discussed Đurišić's occupation. The topic of this article is not "Collaboration of Pavle Đurišić with Axis forces" or "Notable activities of Pavle Đurišić". This is biography article about Pavle Đurišić. His family is important for his biography. You can check it by looking at any of FA biography articles.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 10:02, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I note that PRODUCER has added the father's name. Peacemaker67 (talk) 12:57, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- According to some websites he had a daughter Ljiljana (1937—1943) and a son Ilija (born 5 July 1940). His son Ilija have two sons. Paul (Serbian: Pavle) (born 26 December 1965), named after his grandfather, and Marko (born 26 May 1969). Đurišić's son, who left Yugoslavia in 1960, and grandsons live in Illinois, USA. Đurišić's wife also left Yugoslavia in 1964 and lived in USA where she died in 1981. I believe there are some more reliable sources than websites which can be used to support this information.
- There are claims that his father was also military officer who participated in Balkan Wars and First World War. If it is true that his father also had a military career it should be presented to the readers.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 15:59, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- Which websites? Unless reliable sources are brought to the table this certainly can't be included. Also Pajović mentions none of this. -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 17:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- Of course. That is why I wrote: I believe there are some more reliable sources than websites which can be used to support this information. There is a book "Забрањени очеви у исповестима своје деце" which allegedly contains the text of the interview with Ilija Đurišić in which he presents some details about his family. Unfortunately there is no online version. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 17:54, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- Which websites? Unless reliable sources are brought to the table this certainly can't be included. Also Pajović mentions none of this. -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 17:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I note that PRODUCER has added the father's name. Peacemaker67 (talk) 12:57, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I don' agree with you. This is biography article. I already explained this point to you when we discussed Đurišić's occupation. The topic of this article is not "Collaboration of Pavle Đurišić with Axis forces" or "Notable activities of Pavle Đurišić". This is biography article about Pavle Đurišić. His family is important for his biography. You can check it by looking at any of FA biography articles.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 10:02, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
- I think it is very strange that you are suggesting that this article is not ready for A-Class because we don't know the names of his father, wife and children. He is not notable for having had a wife and children. Inclusion of basic information about his upbringing has been done, and in fact was done during the GA nomination at the request of assessors. In all the texts I own that mention him, not one mentions his family at all. The information that has been obtained by PRODUCER is all in Serbian. Personally, if Google Translate is any measure, this article you have suggested as a source for this information is questionable at least. I fail to see the necessity of including chapter and verse about his family, unless the decisions or actions for which he is notable were made because of his family (and the sources make that connection). Peacemaker67 (talk) 09:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Karađorđe's star
Solved:Information about Karađorđe's star being awarded to Đurišić is added to the article.
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There are claims that Pavle Đurišić was awarded with "Karađorđe's star". Books:
Important note: Miloš Minić was the prosecutor on the Trial of Draža Mihailović. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 18:11, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
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One of the aims of Case Black was disarming of all Chetniks
Solved:Information about Case Black added.
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Jozo Tomasevich emphasizes that one of the aims of Case Black was disarming of all Chetniks. It is very important information that can help explaining the (missing) context of the events related to the capture of Đurišić. Right now the capture of Đurišić and his Chetniks on 14 May 1943 is presented without any context, like it was some kind of mistake, with this sentence:
Source: "The Chetniks" (page 251 and 255, note 164):
--Antidiskriminator (talk) 18:56, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
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Monument
Solved:Information about the monument of Đurišić in Libertyville is already added to the article.
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There is a monument dedicated to Đurišić. It is erected in St. Sava Monastery in Libertyville, Illinois. It can be seen at this movie, 2:21. It is mentioned in this source: Traveling on the Road 21 – Milwaukee Avenue, you can not but to see the monuments to general Draza Mihailovic and his military commanders vojvoda Momcilo Djujic and vojvoda Pavle Djurisic.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 20:51, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
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Biroli-Djukanovic Agreement
Solved:Information about comprehensive collaboration agreement included
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Currently there is a paragraph that generally covers Djurisic's activity in March 1942; however there is a more detailed page in Tomasevich 1975 stating that at the time there was a "comprehensive" Italian-Chetnik agreement formed and signed by Biroli and Djukanovic assumed to be known by Mihailovic. It specifically details the collaboration between the Italians and Chetniks in Montenegro which included about 1,500 Djurisic's men being officially recognized and organized as a "flying detachment" and much more. See page 211 for more info. This should help add more context especially for the Biroli and Djurisic pic. I'll add this when I have the time unless someone else wants to have a go at it. -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 13:27, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
I rearranged the addition to make it clear it was part of the agreement. I also added the open arrangements of mutual understanding. -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 12:56, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
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Google Book links
Solved:In this article, Google Book links are only added for books available in preview
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Should the book references have Google Book links if the book is unable for viewing? -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 01:16, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
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Commemoration controversy?
There are two sentences which explain why this memorial should not be constructed:
- The Association of War Veterans of the National Liberation Army (SUBNOR) objected to the construction of the monument saying that Đurišić was a war criminal who was responsible for the deaths of many colleagues of the veterans association and 7,000 Muslims.
- The following month the Montenegrin government forbade the unveiling of the monument stating that it "caused public concern, encouraged division among the citizens of Montenegro, and incited national and religious hatred and intolerance."
This section has title which includes the word controversy. But there is nothing controversial in this section. A group of people wanted to erect memorial in Berane dedicated to Đurišić. Why? Nobody knows. There is no explanation why this memorial should be constructed. It is carefully explained only why it should not be constructed. I apologize if I am wrong, but I don't think that position of people who wanted to construct this memorial is presented according to WP:NPOV. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:26, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- I can't make hide nor hair of the Google Translate of the glas javnosti article, I'm afraid. Peacemaker67 (talk) 10:35, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
- He "spent some of his youth at Berane" and "had also established his wartime headquarters there". Those reasons are given in the Glas Javnosti article. The article also says that the initiative came "from the part of the Serbian nation which has had to endure communist crimes that began 1941 and that have continued to this day." I don't know if that's Scekic's (head of the committee for the memorial) reasoning or just sensationalism on the part of the newspaper. -- ◅PRODUCER (TALK) 15:29, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
- another reason we might want to take care with the glas javnosti article is that they chose to carefully crop the picture of Djurisic to remove General Biroli... Peacemaker67 (talk) 05:52, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
- I do not propose to progress this comment into an edit unless a WP:RS for the motivation of the people who planned the memorial is located. Peacemaker67 (talk) 00:58, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
NOVA's proposal
Solved:Information about NOVA's proposal added to the article
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See also, Further reading, External links
Solved:Proposal by User:Antidiskriminator to include non-WP:RS in these sections did not achieve consensus.
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I noticed there is no See also, Further reading nor External links section in this article. It might be a good idea to create such sections because the topic of this article is very complex and it would be useful for the readers to point to the articles, sources or websites where it is possible to get more information about the topic of this article.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 18:27, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
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Communists wanted to carry on with the revolution while Đurišić wanted to go on with the uprising
Solved:Source is properly interpreted.
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The text of the article says:
The source (Pawlovich, page 78) says:
I think that the source is misinterpreted especially because the source emphasize that:
Therefore I propose to properly interpret the source and to reword above mentioned paragraph to match what source actually says. Rewording maybe can be done like this:
--Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:22, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
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Berane
There are claims that Đurišić's forces commanded by him captured Berane from Italians on 17—18 July 1941, during July uprising in Montenegro. If that is correct it is very important information which should be added to the article. The current version of the article could mislead readers to believe that communsts captured Berane while Djurisic was subordinated to them.
- Spomenik Pavlu Đurišiću trebalo je podići kada su podizani drugi spomenici iz Drugog svetskog rata na ovim prostorima, jer je i Pavle Đurišić bio oslobodilac Berana. Posle sloma ustanka razišao se sa komunistima i januara 1942. formirao svoj štab. - Historian Goran Kiković in his interview to Glas Javnosti
- Небројем, колико њиховом одлучношћу да умру илипобиједе, Ђуришић приморава италијанскукоманду на предају. Тако је 18. јула Беране опетбило у нашим рукама, а зелени Лим текао крвависпод древног Будима. - Goran Komar, Vojvoda Pavle Đurišić
- "Павле ЂуришиЋ дигао Је Ва- соЈевиЋе 15/16 Јула и опколио Беране" - Zalosna stvarnost: 1941; u spomen 25-o godišnjice trećeg srpskog ustanka, Boz̆idar Sokolović, Vlado Trebjes̀anin - 1966
- "Већ 16 јула устаници су заузели Беране које је опседао капе- тан Павле Ђуришић. У андријевачком срезу устанак је почео 17 јула. Убрзо је дошла ... свој штаб. 5) Почетком октобра 1941, кренули су из Црае Горе за Равну" - Treći srpski ustanak, 1941, Томови 1-2, Sergije M. Živanović
--Antidiskriminator (talk) 06:53, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- Still no idea. Perhaps you would consider taking PRODUCERs advice and provide a translation into English given this is en WP? Peacemaker67 (talk) 07:05, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- en WP has one rule regarding AGF.
- Memorial to Pavle Đurišić should have been built when other memorials connected with WWII were built in this region because "Pavle Đurišić liberated Berane" ... - Historian Goran Kiković in his interview to Glas Javnosti
- Not because they were numerous but because they were determined to be victorious or to die, Đuršić forced Italan command to surrender. That way Berane was again in our hands on 18 July.... - Goran Komar, Vojvoda Pavle Đurišić
- Pavle Đurišić rose Vasojevići and on 15/16 July besieged Berane - Zalosna stvarnost: 1941; u spomen 25-o godišnjice trećeg srpskog ustanka, Božidar Sokolović, Vlado Trebjesšanin - 1966
- Berane was captured on 16 July after it was besieged by captain Pavle Đurišić - Treći srpski ustanak, 1941, Томови 1-2, Sergije M. Živanović
- --Antidiskriminator (talk) 15:45, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- Consult WP:RS on what constitutes a reliable source. Also, seize with these ridiculous "unresolved" tags when not getting your preferred outcome. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 16:52, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- Your comment is unnecessarily harsh and violates Wikipedia:Civility.
- Insisting on using the source which was found unreliable on RSN and at the same time proclaiming any source which does not support certain POV as unreliable is not constructive.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 17:05, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- Answers at RSN "are not official policy" and your misinterpretations of Peacemaker's comments do not help. The sole review, supposedly decidedly against it, agrees that "no falsifications of history appear in its pages". I'm not the one copy-pasting numerous unreliable sources in many sections to support a "certain POV". Also determining whether the sources and their publishers are reliable, scholarly, academic, and peer-reviewed is not a sin. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 20:09, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- Consult WP:RS on what constitutes a reliable source. Also, seize with these ridiculous "unresolved" tags when not getting your preferred outcome. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 16:52, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
- en WP has one rule regarding AGF.
Proposal for assessment as A-Class
Proposal withdrawn:Redundant
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G'day all, You will be pleased to note that Pavle Đurišić was recently assessed as A-Class by WikiProject:Military History. I propose that this article be promoted to A-Class in WikiProjects Yugoslavia, Montenegro, Bosnia and Herzegovina, and Serbia. I request the support of two uninvolved editors from each WikiProject, in accordance with the general A-class assessment criteria. Please discuss under the relevant WikiProject subsection. WikiProject YugoslaviaWikiProject MontenegroWikiProject Bosnia and HerzegovinaI think that article meets all of the A-class criteria, and was promoted as such in the WP Military History, so I don't see a reason why it shouldn't be promoted in the WP Bosnia and Herzegovina. --Wustenfuchs 18:00, 23 July 2012 (UTC) WikiProject Serbia
Regards, Peacemaker67 (talk) 11:11, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
I withdraw this request. It is clear from the lack of interest that either the WikiProjects in question have limited interest in having a proper assessment process for A-Class (similar to that used by MILHIST), or lack the numbers of users to conduct the assessments. In one case the process (with only one WikiProject Serbia editor that showed a great deal of interest) was excruciating and largely unproductive. The article in question is now a Featured Article. I do not intend to repeat this experiment with the WikiProjects in question, and will stick to GA, MILHIST A-Class and FA in future. Peacemaker67 (talk) 02:53, 10 September 2012 (UTC) |
Timeline problem, the split between communists and nationalists
Not resolved, but no discussion for three weeks
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Within six weeks after uprising started on 13 July 1941 Italians regained control over towns and communication routes. Here is what article says happened then (end of August, beginning of September 1941):
Tomasevich's work was used to support the the first sentence. Here is what Tomasevich wrote on pages 140-142: I think that the source is not properly interpreted. The text of the article could mislead the readers to believe that a split between communists and nationalists in Montenegro developed until August-September 1941, after Italians regained control over towns and communication routes. That is not correct. The source explicitly says that it happened at the beginning of 1942. It is important to be precise with the timeline here because events of this period are very important for understanding the full context of the future events. Đurišić withdrew into the hinterland not because of the split between communists and nationalists, but because of Italians who captured towns and communication routes. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 12:41, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
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July uprising
Resolved: Information about Djurisic being one of the main commanders of the uprising added
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The role of Đurišić in July uprising is still eluded. Milovan Đilas says that "DjuriSic had distinguished himself during the July uprising in the battle at Berane, where the worst fighting took place." link. If Đurišić's enemy (Milovan Đilas) admits that he had distinguished role in the worst fighting during uprising then his role was really significant and claims that Đurišić was "... a hero of the July uprisings in Montenegro" are not mistake of biased book.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 10:06, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
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Was Đurišić subordinated to the communists
Not resolved in the opinion of User:Antidiskriminator, who has not produced a WP:RS in over three weeks to support his contention
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The text of the article says:
Does it mean that Đurišić was subordinated to the communists during this uprising? If not maybe it should be clarified because the existing text implies that Đurišić and his forces were subordinated to the communists. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 23:53, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
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Philip Cohen's 'Serbia's Secret War
Not resolved, but no discussion for three weeks
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According to RSN discussion] Philip Cohen's 'Serbia's Secret War is not reliable source.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 21:44, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
I did not admit anything, I summarised what was said at WP:RSN. Your English comprehension needs some work, you just read into my comments what you want to see. Peacemaker67 (talk) 14:03, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
Yes, and whilst I believe that was Fifelfoo's conclusion, I now have good reason to question the review that was produced. As this came up while I was working on the Ante Pavelic article (as I'm sure you will recall), I searched for more information on two of the dubious sources used in that article, published by the Lord Byron Foundation for Balkan Studies. In my research I came across a post on the blog of Dr Marko Attila Hoare (a former member of the faculty of history at Cambridge University and the author of 'Genocide and Resistance in Hitler's Bosnia' published for the British Academy by Oxford University Press, which is also used as a source in this article as well as the Pavelic one). And he supports Cohen and his book. I have linked the blog post here [2]. On the basis of Hoare's recommendation, I have therefore re-considered my position and will treat Cohen as a WP:RS. Peacemaker67 (talk) 07:33, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
All three uninvolved editors at RSN agreed about the contents of the book or its correctness. Yes, Churn and change wrote: "I am not disagreeing with you on the contents of the book or its correctness" ... but "using general guidelines"..." Cohen's facts can be included; his opinion should be attributed, since it doesn't seem the mainstream view. If adding the opinion and its rebuttal makes the article unwieldy, it can be dropped if the other cited material is higher quality." You refused to accept the first RSN using excuse that it was based on one comment. The second RSN is not based on one comment. It is based on the consensus of several uninvolved editors and should be respected. Someone who don't AGF in your case could see your excuse not to respect the first RSN because "in fact only one editor gave a view" as tendentious editing. When you tagged one article and wrote this comment you did not mind it being based on the view of only one editor only two hours after this one single comment was left at RSN. Just because you (mistakenly?) thought it supports your POV. But when RSN does not support your POV for 20 days you claim that it is premature to conclude anything. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 20:36, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
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A song
Not resolved in the opinion of User:Antidiskriminator, but no discussion for three weeks
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There is a very popular Chetnik song "Đurišiću mlad majore" [Djurisic, young major] written during the war and dedicated to Djurisic. Maybe it would be a good idea to add this information to the article?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 15:54, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
Besides above mentioned list of sources which can easily be found trough Google Books search:
there is additional source for this song dedicated to Djurisic:
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