Talk:Paul Moist

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I took this out of the article. It may be true, but it's pretty POV:

As a strong advocate for quality public services, Moist has led the union in its fight against privatization. Under his leadership, CUPE's work in rebuilding strong communities has intensified. The union is on the front line defending public health care, building the new deal for cities and playing a key role in the fight for public, quality child care.

I also removed some family info. --Bookandcoffee 20:19, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It probably did qualify as POV, having basically come from his bio on the CUPE site. That being said, I think his priorities say something about him and his view of where CUPE should be going are, so I've tried to reword it -- feel free to keep tweaking it if you feel there's still PoV issues. --IanClysdale 17:13, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]