Talk:Paul Conneally

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Should that read Oxford Polytechnic? Richard Pinch 06:44, 27 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

removeal of unsupported statement re 'haibunic prose'

I've removed the following from the article:

and he is known for coining the phrase 'haibunic prose'<ref>[http://www.poetrymagazines.org.uk/magazine/record.asp?id=17225] ''Haibun and Realism I:Some Thoughts upon the Developing Schools of Haibun'' - Jamie Edgecombe in Blithe Spirit (Journal of British Haiku Society) Vol 16 No.1 March 2006]</ref> referring to a particular style of 'haiku prose' in [[haibun]]

because Edgecombe's cited article in Blithe Spirit mentions Conneally just once, and merely says that Conneally and Edgecombe both refer to a pre-existing writing style by the same name. The author makes no claim about Conneally coining the phrase 'haibunic prose'.--Yumegusa (talk) 09:46, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Was best thing to do. (though there is reference to an earlier date - is it areference to apiece by Ross with Conneally in it? Can't find it). 86.26.196.80 (talk) 14:55, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

citation fails verification - "schema that include location-specific topics"

The cited text in Jacket 26 makes no mention of Conneally including "location-specific topics" in the schema. It prints the poem, and the only mention of Conneally is "renga schema: Paul Conneally". --Yumegusa (talk) 11:06, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've removed the offending statement. --Yumegusa (talk) 11:41, 26 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

citation fails verification - "Conneally's projects include hypertext works resulting out of actions..."

The article cited to support the statement "Conneally's projects include hypertext works resulting out of actions initiated by Conneally and others via the internet and in the real world" states:

Paul Conneally's Charnwood Arts project, Haikumania, linked rens (connected haiku) and declared that "By connecting we can change the world." The site, unfortunately, "has now returned underground."

That's all it says about Conneally. The article section goes on to write about other websites using "hyperlinks to link writing and images about night visions by both children and adults". --Yumegusa (talk) 12:49, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Have changed to and citation now sems correct —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.26.196.80 (talk) 14:53, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]